Subject: RE:Passion in the Air Part 1
From: bogue@oak.negia.net
Date: 1/11/1998, 5:53 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com, pmak@cs.dal.ca

Ryoucilo
bogue@negia.net
Uh, I'm probably not the first person to say this and I will certainly not
be the last.
Akane finds out that Ryouga's P-chan and doesn't hate him and actually loves
him? Sorry that simply isn't
plausible. This relationship would have needed some development. Something
like this: Akane beats
Ryouga to a bloody pulp, finds out what Ranma was doing with Shampoo.
Heart-broken she runs
back to the dojo, but runs into Ryouga. She tells him that she hates him and
he tries to comfort
her and she begins to forgive him for what he did. I don't think that in
this situation Akane
should immediately do it with Ryouga, but that he should earn back her trust
and maybe  *maybe*
Akane might fall in love with Ryouga. I'm not saying to get rid of the
relationship I am just saying that
you should re-think the way that you set it up. Until I find better things
to write about. Ja ne.