Eric: gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!

Sarah: *dead silence*

Cubicle: *solemn and strangly withdrawn*

Dim: *raining quietly*

Staple Plus: *eyeing Cubicle specutively*

Computer: *hums quietly to himself*

Whiskey and Tequilla: *munching quietly on food oblivious to everything*

Eric: I cant believe you ended it there.  Couldn't you please have finished
it?  Ahhhhhhhhhh........ and now with the most depressing song in the
background (In your eyes... Peter Gabriel).

Sarah: *now sheathed in emerald radiance*  You did say it was long.

Eric: well all i can say, aside from the ending (humph), is wow.  Eight
months maybe but its one hell of a tale.  Trying to put into words how your
story made me feel.

Sarah: I've always been one for darker tales.  More gritty types, getting
into the mind of the characters.  They are always the best.  They make you
think and you always wind up hoping with them.  Its easy to learn to like
characters like that, like Chaste and Ryouga.

Eric: On the slightly critical side, you did have a couple of typos but
nothing major.

Dim: For once i'll say this, It was depressingly refreshing and well
crafted. *a little thunder and lightening rolls off him*  It had everything,
there was suspense and pressure, I believe i speak for everyone here when I
say that I hoped for the best for the characters.  I was apprehensive when
they were at the cliff at _she_ was at the bottom. I felt anger at Ryouga
for his display of temper after recieving the invitation and i truly hope
that things work out for the characters.  I too feel slightly dissappointed
in the ending and though imagining the ending in your own way is fine, it
just wont feel complete.

Cubicle: I liked the little bit about Washu as well...  heh.

Sarah: It was great.

Eric: Quite possibly amongst the best stories I've ever read.  I'd say bravo
or job well done but it feels dangerously inadequate.

Sarah: lets just say Thanks.