A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away.... (Actually 08:37 PM 1/10/98
+0000) you wrote:

This is the epilogue for Dire Fates. DF Part 3 is being cleaned up.
And we're working on the outtakes/credits/final commentary, which 
will be posted to the FFML shortly. Once they are all done, we'll 
likely post them all to RAAC at once.

Possible problem areas:
Hell
Belldandy/Keiichi

Any C&C would be appreciated, nay, demanded, begged for, whatever it 
takes. ^_^

-David & Rod

Greetings.

You were right to suspect the Keiichi/Belldandy situation as a problem area.

For the life of me, I can't see Belldandy just leaving Keiichi like that.  I
always envisioned Belldandy putting up more of a fight than that; more like
that scene in Yggdrasil before the First of the Fallen showed up.  It just
feels wrong.....unless you intend to write another story.

BTW, are you considering doing another Hellblazer/AMG fic?  I really enjoyed
this story.  It has the potential for many, many more fics.

But then, that's just my opinion. I could be wrong. :)



Zack Seaholm - Anime fan, Weathernut.
Avatar (Type IV) of the Goddess Belldandy.

wxnut@hotmail.com

"Even if a thousand men forget the beauty you once were, you and I must not
let it leave our hearts."

                                                -Belldandy