This is a crossover 'fic I've been working on for a while. I'm up to
eight parts, and will probably be at ten before I'm finished with it.
I'd really like some C&C on this, as I haven't got a whole lot from my
posting to alt.toys.transformers. I'm going to post it to r.a.a.c.,
but I want it to be complete first, and this place has been
recommended to me as a good place to get feedback from interested
readers. I'm interested in _constructive_ criticism, not just "I
really liked this!" (though the latter _is_ good for the old ego, I'll
admit :); as long as you don't flame me, I won't take it too badly.
More authors' notes follow the individual sections of the story.
A note on archival of the story: Archival as per all posts sent
through the FFML is perfectly fine, but please don't put it on any
other webpages or anything without asking me first. I'd like to know
where my story is going, particularly since it isn't necessarily in
its final form yet, y'see. :)
Thanks, and I'm looking forward to hearing from you!