Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][Ranma/FF7]Final Chaos 1/2 Part 2
From: Jon Farber
Date: 1/5/1998, 1:32 AM
To: FFML

Well, okay...  I am going to offer my opinion on this series right 
now...

KAWAII!!!!!

I like it.  It's light, I'm giggling through it, puts a smile on my 
face.  I really liked the part where Ranma was explaining his fiancee 
situation to Cloud, and Cloud thought his life was easier...

Personally, I would only change one thing...  In the fight, instead of 
Tifa yelling "Lightning Bolt 3", I would have her chant a short spell... 
Makes it a bit more real...  Oh yeah... Word Wrap would be nice... ^_-

Aside from that, I like this... Looking forward to the next part...
-- JD Farber email: sabreb@erols.com ICQ: 3378089 Lover of Shonen Girls, and Shojo Men. ESPECIALLY RYEN!!!!