Subject: Re: [FFML] (C&C)(MST)Mamas Hand 5-6
From: Douglas Helm
Date: 1/4/1998, 8:15 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

[Bison:(Raises an eyebrow) What's got the kid so worked up?
(The others fill him in.)
Bison:(Shaking with rage) WHAT?!?!  After seeing the death of my 
little sister at the hands of my fathers abuse, I am subjected to 
watch it happen to ANOTHER?!!!
Ranma: We weren't too thrilled when we found out about this either ya 
know.]

I'd be slightly worried if you were thrilled, much better choise to replace
Usagi for this fic from the last guy... er, demon.

"That's very good. Boy, you're smart," Usagi said, "What if I promise 
to be home at twenty to four?" She smiled slightly, "You can draw me 
a nice picture and show it to me when I get home."

[Ranma: Well I'll be...
Gohan: She actually caught a hint.
Bison:(Raises an eyebrow) So I take it this girl isn't very smart?
(Both men slug J.Bison in the face.)
Bison:(Rubbing his nose) That was unnecesary.
Ranma: We're the only ones who can say stuff about her... got it!]

<snicker...> I figured that joke was going to pop up. Well It isn't that
Usagi is and air head (although depending on who you ask that could be
debateable), just sometimes she's not as swift at realizing the obvious. In
other words *vast* potential *little* application.

[(J.Bison breaks down in tears and the ghost of his sister appears 
standing
over him and hugs him softly. {BTW, this is one of his win poses.})]

^_^ awsome winning pose.

<Mommy said she be back at twenty to four,> Chibi-Usa glanced up 
towards the clock, <That's a long time away.> "I don't know..." she 
said reluctantly. <What's school anyway?!?> Giving another sniffle, 
she looked towards the door that her mother had left by. <Mommy, 
please come back.>

[Gohan:(Going SSJ) "What's... SCHOOL"?!?!?!!!  If I EVER get my hands 
on that... that... BASTARD, I'll...
Ranma:(Growling) You'll wait your turn, just like everyone else.
Bison:(Glowing with Psycho Power) You'd better hope you get to go 
before me, or there will be nothing left for you.]

Oh boy, suddenly I have a picture of all these anime characters having a
violent race to see who can be Endymion to a pulp first.

[Gohan: It won't be her that's in trouble when they find out the 
truth.
Ranma: I know, with all the people who have been reading this who are 
out for Endymions blood, I'm almost starting to feel sorry for him.
(Pause.)
All: ALMOST.]

Oh yes, I can see Endymion's going to hurt plenty. Considering the planned
revenge against him it'll like hit 100+ before the end come near.

[Bison: Sobo?
Gohan: Another varient of Grandmother... I think.]

Yep, (makes note : Add glossary ) Sobo is used when refering to your
grandmother.

Chibi-Usa wrinkled her forehead and said, "Mommy, what's homework?!?" 
Both Usagi and Ikuko stared at her in some disbelief. "Nani?" she 
asked starting to worry again. <Did I say something wrong?!?>

[Bison:(Glowing again) I... will... KILL... him.]

Back of the line please, other people are ahead of you include Usagi-sama.

"Oh yeah? Like what?!?" Rei demanded.

[Ranma:(Sarcasticaly) Well gee, don't be too concerned.
Bison: THIS is one of her FRIENDS???]

Errr...  Yes, although why Usagi tolerates her is a mystery to me.

[Gohan: You may want to put a coma after "Last Saturday".

Good point.

Bison: Ranma...
Ranma: Yeah.
Bison: You are in a relationship with Usagi... correct?
Ranma: Yeah...
Bison: And the author of your story has mentioned there may be a side 
story with... you know.
Ranma: Yeah...
Bison: And this girl is Usagi's daughter from the future...
Ranma: Yeah...
Bison: So... does that mean you're Endymion?

Uh oh...

Ranma:(Furious) NO!  THAT'S SOMEONE ELSE FROM A DIFFERENT REALITY AND,
FOR YOUR INFORMATION, IF I EVER HAD A DAUGHTER I WOULD *NEVER* 
*EVER* DO ANYTHING LIKE THAT TO HER!  GOT IT?!!
Bison:(Intimidated and in a small voice) Just asking.]

Well one good thing is Ranma didn't beat him into a pulp. Must be saving
that for Endymion.

A minute passed and still Usagi didn't come. <Mommy promised that 
she'd be here,> Chibi-Usa thought as she strained to see past the 
wall, <Maybe she got lost...> That thought only served to heighten 
her sense of worry. As another minute slipped by Chibi-Usa started to 
feel a desperation. <Maybe... maybe Daddy found her,> Chibi-Usa 
thought. The last image of her mother being flung across the room 
rushing towards her. Squeezing her eyes shut to try and block the 
image, Chibi-Usa whimpered slightly.

[Gohan: Maybe you should change that to, "Chibi-Usa thought, as the 
last image of her mother being flung across the room, rushing towards 
her passed across her mind.]

Hmmm.... yes I like that phrasing, arigato.

[Gohan: Her not "hear".]

Doh... That's what I get for send out beta stuff.

[Bison:(Barely able to surpress his rage) That poor child... do not 
worry little one.  I have sworn that things like this would not 
happen again if I could help and I MEAN it.]

O_O I'm going to have to ensuire a suitable punishment for Endymion that
allso all characters to get thier revenge.

[Ranma: Tell me about it, those things must lower the temperature of 
the room by 50 friggin' degrees.
Gohan:(Nods and then turns to Bison) It's something that happened in 
a part of our chapter two that our author decided not to show.]

^_^ I think Ranma was pleased about that.

[Bison:(Growling and glowing with Psycho Power) Inability to have a 
bowel movement... welts... BRUISES... "under the CIRCUMSTANCES"!!!  
THAT'S IT!!!
[J.Bison teleports.])

Uh oh... not another one!

[(Both men try to picture Chibi-Usa eating with the same intensity as 
Usagi.)
Both: ....
Ranma: You know... it's not like you've got much room to talk you 
know.
Gohan: Same to you.]

LOL! The real worry would be if Chibi-Usa managed to gain a large appitied
the Usagi.

Bison:(Somewhere else) PSYCHO PILLAR!!!

(winces) Yep this is going to get rough near the end. Better fortify the
place before that.

(A gigant cone of Psycho Power raises into the sky and a, quickly 
becoming familiar, cry of intense pain is heard.  J.Bison teleports 
back in.)

(shakes head) Yes this is going to be a race, I can just picture it. Their
battling over each other to get to Endymion first so they can make his life
a living hell for a long as he's allowed to keep it.

Ranma: Feel better?
Bison:(Smirking) You'd better believe it buster.
Gohan: And we'll be back.

Thanks for the comments, much appreicated.


Doug

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