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I thought this was a nicely written story, with good balanced
characterization of Ranma and Akane. I only spotted one typo:

--I Agree it was nicely written.

BUT...

I really can't buy the ending. It's not believable to me that Nabzy
would be that cruel to Ranma -- especially when she's not making any
profit off it. This just seems a bit sadistic for her.

I think Nabiki mentioned removing a pest from her room.  Could she
have had a mouse in her room?  Imagine the entertainment value alone.
she probably has a video camera for just such Occurances
=^oo^=

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