Subject: [C&C][ff][r1/2][eva]For the Sake of the Children Chapter 3
From: Scott Pollert
Date: 1/3/1998, 1:25 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

	Ack! It's the dreaded 'What is ki?' discussion! ;-) Not that I'm
complaining or anything, I've always found this little conversation rather
interesting. But, Anand, while I'm NOT accusing you of plagiarization or
anything, this discussion looks an *awful* lot like the one that appears
between Rei and Ranma in _Lines of Destiny_ by Louis-Philippe Giroux. It
looks like you read it, and then unconsiously repeated it when you wrote
your own fic. You might want to look into putting in a little more variance
between the two. 

This is was a bit of a setup, but I needed some of these conversations to
take place.   A word to the wise, this fic is going to contain more
character development and dialog than action.  Hope you enjoy it anyway.

	Sounds good to me. I think it would probably be a little over the top if
Ranma were to take on one of the Angels by himself anyway. He's strong, but
I think that that would be a touch ridiculous. However, I do like what
appears to be your rational for how he got through the AT field. That it's
not the strength of the energy used to penetrate the field, but the *type*
of energy. 

	I'll be looking forward to more from this fic.

Thanks for listening,
Scott Pollert
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Scott Pollert [pollerts@hsonline.net]