Jon Farber <sabreb@erols.com> wrote:

Begin reading here......

Thanks, never would've figured that out... :-P

	A new scene played in front of her.  She saw herself being 
attacked by hundreds of people.  She saw herself laugh in contempt as 
she blasted them from the face of the earth.  In seconds, only two 
remained.  Her sister, and her sister's husband.

	The two stood defiantly against her, looking angry and sad.  She 
saw the husband speak, but could not make out the words.  She looked to 
his mouth, reading the words from there.

"Kasumi? Funny meeting you here! Betty, bring some tea for Kasumi, will
you? What seems to be the trouble, Ranma? You've lost a lot of weight!"

         What happened to the sister's body was only half of it.  The 
sister was still alive.  The woman looked down, and saw the beating 
heart of her sister.  She looked over to see the husband staring down in 
morbid amazement, paralyzed by the sight of his wife.  The sisters 
melted eyes moved in their sockets to try to sight the husband.  Her 
mouth moved to try to form words, but her tongue was no longer there.

sisters should be sister's

       The woman shook her head.  "I never want to see that again."

       "That, my dear child, is up to you."  The man handed the 
flashlight to the woman.

That was a very nicely written dream sequence, though the message was a
bit... unsubtle.

	Before she left, she kissed the first two fingers on her left 
hand, and touched them to the man's forehead.  She walked away, leaving 
only the toy as a mute witness to her heinous act.

It was Goku! He done it!

	The nurse smiled.  It was the same grin Nabiki had acid etched 
into her memory from that afternoon.  From the time she lost her 
innocence.

Actually, I wonder if she ever had any.... :)

	"You can scream all you like… They aren’t going to hear you…  
You are all alone now…  You, Nabiki, are mine."  The woman started to 

You need to fix these ... s. They don't show up properly on my mailer.

	Nabiki was paralyzed with fear.  She scrambled backward in her 
bed to try to escape the demonic nurse.  In her haste she knocked over 
the little clock radio sitting on her nightstand.

	<FIRE!  HEY!  HEY!  HEY!>

Good thing Beavis and Butthead happened to be on....

	Nabiki collapsed to the floor, exhausted from the effort, and 
feeling the first effects of paradox.  <Killer headache… Could be worse 
though.>  The girl pushed herself up to her knees and crawled back over 
to the bed to fall asleep.  <We can talk about this in the morning.>

Who is she talking to with that last line?

Well, I liked it. Too short, though. Hurry up with the next part
already!


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics