| Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic] Remembering That Memory |
| From: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe) |
| Date: 12/31/1997, 10:05 PM |
| To: "FFML" <fanfic@fanfic.com> |
This was a nicely done character piece. Everybody seemed pretty believable and in character. The only thing I didn't like was the title. Mabye change it to just "That Memory"? As is, "Remembering" and "Memory" are kinda redundant. Gary Kleppe http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics