Only one complaint.  You should have done this as a full lenght fic.  
Awsome concept.  You had a realy good start, then at the last minute 
it turned to spam.

I think you should concider rewriting it as a regular fic.

And as for the question about Urd.  yes Urd rymes with turd.  Crude, 
but to the point.  The names can be pronounced fairly well 
phoneticly, (Pardon my spelling) sence they are written in a 
romanised version of the Japanese.

Again, this could be an awsome fic.  If you ever do rewrite it, let 
me know.  I would love to preread.