Again, this could be an awsome fic.  If you ever do rewrite it, let 
me know.  I would love to preread.
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Wow. Somebody actually liked it...and to think that I thought it sucked after 
reading it again. Okay, here's my plans so far. I was thinking about doing a 
minor rewrite. Nothing major, I don't have the patience to make this a 
full-length fic, although if I got more ideas to go with I could expand it to 
maybe three chapters. If I have enough time. Anyway, yeah, you could be a 
prereader.