Dear Richard :

I have a couple of questions about this story,

One Did the two Akane's bodies switch places? In one part it seemed as
if they had; (where she broke out of the hospital) in another part it
appeared only their minds/souls did. (Ranma not noticing anything
different but her expression).

Two Did anyone in the story realize their were two Akanes? Even Akane
seemed to think it was just a dream afterwards. Perhaps I should be
asking did anyone in the tale realize there were two parallel worlds
involved.

Good work neverless you conjured up both worlds quite effectively and
while I would have liked to have seen more of the  sane Akane in the
BE world. That would probably have changed the thrust of the story
quite a bit as she probably would have been able to convince people
she was from another world. For people I would consider Ryoga and
Nabiki and maybe Dr. Ono as the most likely to figure out what was
going on.

Rick Robinson
rik@cfanet.com
who is learning to write the hard way