On Sun, 14 Dec 1997 11:44:23 -0500
"Addison Godel" <agodel@avana.net> wrote:

Fredrik Lundgren writes:

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Hm, let's see.  Definitely you'd need to develop Shinji's interest in the
girl with care, and take your time handling his reactions.  Take into
account both his age and the unique circumstances of his life.

Considering as Angels are not Sailor Moon youmas or anything of that sort,
you'd have to pick a specific Angel to work with.  If you haven't seen all
of the series (which is unclear), you'd probably be best off waiting until
you have, because with Eva fics of this sort, even alternate outcome ones,
you have to make it clear when things are happening.  (Did that make any
sense?)

You're probably right about that. I've only seen up to episode 12 (Don't
ya just hate this PAL thingie -_-)

Guess I'll put this fanfic away for a while. BUT, no worries... I've got
other ideas ^_^!!!!

How about this!!!!

I wanted to make a Ranma/Rokyo revelation/AMS crossover.
Ranma dies and is reincarnated (haven't really figured out how or why so
far o_O). Anyway, he dicovers that he really is an incarnation of the
god Susanoh. Needless to say he has some difficulties excepting this
fact (who wouldn't!!!).

Soon the heavens finds out that Susanoh has been awakened and deals with
it by sending... I think you can figure this part out ^_^

To Susanohs help comes Kojiro Soma and another person who claims to be
the incarnation of the goddess Amaterass.

Story still needs some work, but I think it has potential :)

Also, you might want to address how your Shinji feels about the other
females in his life---Rei and Asuka primarily, but if you want you could
use Mana (from the Win95 game), and maybe even Misato is good for some
probing.  All of this could tie in with his almost killing Asuka and Rei
(which you intend to have him do) and give them more connection to the fic.

Um.... Who's Mana???

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