Mark Doherty wrote:

At 11:21 PM 14/12/97 -0600, Ranma Al'Thor wrote:

Nice start.  Interesting choice of a place to introduce Ryuunosuke into
the story.  Maybe a good title would be

'A Tale of Two Ryu*' :)

Or, 'A Day Long Ryued'. ^_^

Of course, we all know just which 'Tendo' Ryuu's going to be engaged to,
with Nodoka there. Heh, heh, heh...

I rather suspect that all concerned will Ryuu the day that Kumon came to
town.



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