*sigh* OK, before this devolves into a petty argument...

1) Dr. Thinker, I'm assuming that you're not a native English speaker,
because your grip on the written language is... tenuous, at best. Lurker
has some very valid statements when he critiqued your fic. Me, I didn't
even bother reading beyond the first page because of the grammar problems.
Not many people have the patience to wade through vague, poorly written
fics when they have to struggle to make out the meanings of the sentences.
It never hurts to brush up on your English skills. (Trust me on this one;
my teachers in high school spent my entire senior year trying to convince
me to be an English major.) Spellcheckers aren't worth dick, either,
especially when you write the wrong word down! I'd strongly advise you to
study grammar skills before writing another fic.

2) I'm also assuming you're not in high school yet because of how rapidly
your MST of Lurker's MST degenerated into a flame war. We don't do MST's
for the hell of it, dear.. MSTing a fic takes a LOT of time and effort (it
ususally takes me at least an hour to MSt a short fic), and we MSt because
a) we either like the fic, or b) because we believe the fic needs work.
Lurker wasn't flaming you, he was trying to point out AGAIN that you need
some heavy work on your grammar skills. 

If you want to flame me for this, go right ahead. I'm just trying to
help as best I can, although I may be harsh (I dno't like seeing my
friends get flamed). Just don't take it to
the list, please; cuz this LilTigre's takin' the gloves off and puttin' on
the brass knuckles...

Jess, the LilTigre =^_^=