Subject: [Query][El Haz][Oracle] Need opinion
From: Matthew Lewis
Date: 12/12/1997, 4:51 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


	Well, I'm working on part three, and I was wondering if I should have
Hayashi meet the three priestesses. He's going to try and meet them, but
whether or not he actually succeeds is debatable. He does not necessarily
have to go to Mt. Muldoon to see them; they could be in the countryside,
looking for new members to take the orders, dispensing wisdom, on
sabbatical, on tour even, whatever (just mentioning some possibilities). 
	Also, what do you think their reactions would be to him? Like, dislike,
indifference?

	On a different note, it looks like my curse has struck again. First part
gets some C&C, and the only reason I know people saw the second part is
that I saw it on the list. Perhaps you missed it however, or you have not
had any time to look it over yet, or you just don't read El Hazard stuff, I
don't know.
	What I do know is that any comments would be appreciated, and if you need
this part and/or the previous one, just e-mail me. I'd be more than happy
to oblige you.
	Hey, if I don't get any C&C, I'll just assume you think it's absolutely
perfect (which I am positive it isn't. My hands are itching to write a
revision, but without your input, it becomes harder for me to decide what
to change).
	C&C now, and you'll get this El Hazard duffle bag, normally a $24.95
value....
	(Help me! I'm starting to sound like public television!)



Matthew "Shortfics are a way of life" Lewis
	maybeso@ican.net
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The Second Question:
 What happens when you win?
   When your enemies are at your mercy: how will 
you act then? Compromise is the temptation of the
weak; this is the test for the strong.
What are you going to do?
	-Salman Rushdie, The Satanic Verses
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