Barry Cadwgan <bcadwgan@fl.net.au> 12/10/97 03:01pm >>>

James Champagne wrote:

Okay. This is (everyone join in, now) MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT
FANFICTION. Just a random thought on a slow morning. So
please be kind.

Comments, good or bad, are welcome.

That was hialarious!

Agreed.  Absolutely hilarious.

At the start I wasn't sure that it wasn't the Tendo Dojo.. or that
Ryouga wasn't going to  blast through or something..

I thought that it was going to be Ryouga delivered by Akane Airlines. 
You know, Akane punts Ryouga towards the target, Ryouga blows the
wall, and / or the building.  You'd think  that Akane would be geting better
at her "object" placement, after all the practice she has done... <grin>

But the Bicycle bell!!!  Brilliant!

Absolutely.  I loved it.  I had to stop and think that one over for a minute. 
Then, when Shampoo came a knockin' I figured it out.  Nice touch.

SuperHentai