James Champagne wrote:
Okay. This is (everyone join in, now) MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT
FANFICTION. Just a random thought on a slow morning. So
please be kind.
Comments, good or bad, are welcome.
Very good and the conclusion (with the arrival of Shampoo) was
absolutely hilarious. I especially like the way you tie it more to
Ranma 1/2 with the mention of Ucchan's at the end.
I was expecting something like the ending, with a Ranma character
breaking in, but to be honest I wasn't sure how a Ranma character would
be brought into things, and I was expecting a lost Ryouga instead of
Shampoo...
And the writing was very nice, too.
Well done.