Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] [Eva] [Of Ikari and Ayanami]
From: Andrew Huang
Date: 12/7/1997, 5:52 PM
To: Mee-Lise Robinson
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

	Very nice. Good, slow pace; good, solid imagery. It never occurred
to me that it might take so much for Rei II to adjust to..."being". Rei
III was almost immediately functional, so I assumed that Rei II had been
as well. But here is given the situation which would allow for such a bond
between Gendou and Rei to be built; the lack of that may be why Rei III
despised Gendou so much. Good work.

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