Florencio B. de la Merced, Jr. wrote:

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A Glorious Day - Ranma and Akane 2gether 4ever... Death to all the others

by Lara Bartram

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<a whistle blows and a train arrives once more, a portal yawns and two men
deboard once more, a shiver runs up it's spine and Reality spills its soup
once more>

Reality: Check, please!

Keener: Heh, ummmmm, Florencio? Ranma and Akane are OOC.

Krudd: <shrugs> Same thing you towd Fcasper when he miswepwesented Cwow.

Keener: Other then that, pretty funny. It's always harder to do a storyline of
the reviewers actually reacting then just handing out one-liners. A bit over
the top and I wouldn't try this style on a large fic, but definatly a welcome
change.

Krudd: As for this <holds up Lara's fic>

Keener: Well, if I must play Keanu for this one, you forgot Ryouga. I know you
Lara, how could you not take the chance to have Akane learn of his little
midnight Akane Appreciation Society?

Krudd: I thought you said Wyouga was innocent of iwl-intentions.

Keener: He is, but the chance of Akane understanding that, ESPECIALLY this
Akane, are nill to none. Go ahead Lara, it's for the sake of the story, fry
yourself up some bacon.

Krudd: Kun-chan's going to kill you.

Keener: <sighs> She hates me right now, anyway. Probably has to do with that
stupid fiancee disscussion. Oh well. Other then that, well the fic was amusing
in premise and the last paragraph sorted it out nicely, but it did seem a
trifle rushed. Felt like a spam fic more then anything. <shrugs> Probably your
intention, but I'd say expand and hulk smash EVERYTHING! Come on Lara, it's
fun and I know you of all people can do it!

Krudd: <pales visibly> Wha-what are you unleashing?

Keener: Dunno, should be fun as all hell though. <turns to crowd and strips
off his armor to reveal the Eva pilot suit underneath... shamless plug suit
that is> By the way, for a different outlook on the same subject, especially
people who want to see Ukyo get a little payback, try Gary's and my
compilation fic Final Embrace. Available on an RAAC archive near you! Pick it
up and read more about it lurker boy!

Krudd: See ya next time, wuv ya Wara, you too Fworencio... <looks at Keener>

Keener: Gomen, Krudd. I know it's OOC but I just thought it be kawaii. <steps
through portal>

FFIRC. C&C? It's what we do!
Revenge's End Mad Bishonen Boy
Caretaker of the Dark and Lonely Place (COR Deaconate)
Krudd (Krillian and Elmer Fudd Amalgalm, don't ask)
The Parrot King
Kaizer Soize
Midnight Writer's Guild Member

(Can Ryouga and Mihoshi survive versus Oshi's psychic Basselops of Doom? Craft
2) (comming soon!)
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