Keener <otakunxs@bellsouth.net> wrote:

Keener: Well, if I must play Keanu for this one, you forgot Ryouga. I know you
Lara, how could you not take the chance to have Akane learn of his little
midnight Akane Appreciation Society?

Krudd: I thought you said Wyouga was innocent of iwl-intentions.

Keener: He is, but the chance of Akane understanding that, ESPECIALLY this
Akane, are nill to none. Go ahead Lara, it's for the sake of the story, fry
yourself up some bacon.

Krudd: Kun-chan's going to kill you.

Keener: <sighs> She hates me right now, anyway. Probably has to do with that
stupid fiancee disscussion. Oh well. Other then that, well the fic was amusing
in premise and the last paragraph sorted it out nicely, but it did seem a
trifle rushed. Felt like a spam fic more then anything. <shrugs> Probably your
intention, but I'd say expand and hulk smash EVERYTHING! Come on Lara, it's
fun and I know you of all people can do it!

I think you're taking too seriously a story that was meant as a parody.

[Gary glows with an unholy red light] It WAS a parody, wasn't it Lara?


Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe