>From the Scriviner:
Hello everyone! The following is my first attempt at
a filksong (at least I think it's a filk in anycase). At
the same time, it also serves as a teaser and the opening
video to a soon to be released (note this is Scriviner's
soon) meld, Magical Knight Evangelion Wing. I hope you like
it. As usual, C&C, public and private (ebon@i-manila.com.ph)
is always welcome.
P.S. Although it seems that I packed a rather large number
of scenes for such a short song, remember that so did the
original Angel's Cruel Thesis. The cut scenes were only
split seconds long.
Chorus of Angels
(To the tune of the Evangelion Opening theme 'Angel's Cruel
Thesis)
(Note: The '_' indicates a song portion rather than the video
scene, video scenes are denoted by '<>')
<Black screen>
_Angels' voices rising in chorus
<A vague sort of light filters in revealing 5 massive
silhouettes of what are probably mecha. In the foreground
clearly seen are three individuals in elegant white robes
trimmed in blue and gold and bearing staves. They are Guru
Clef, Commander Gendou Ikari, and Dr. J (whose artificial
limbs seem crystaline rather than metallic>
<slow close up pan of the three men's faces>
_Songs of battle are whispered on the wind
{Instrumental}
<The three raise their staves as one and there is a slight
increase in the light, bringing some of the details of the
mecha clearer, but there is a sudden overwhelming white
flash and the screen is now totally white. The Magical
Knight Evangelion Wing logo burns itself in dark letters on
the white. The black lettering consumes the white as though
it were burning through it, consuming it utterly.>
_Heartbeats, to measure the time
<cut scene: Trowa Barton, in a black robe holding up an old
fashioned watch by it's chain as it swings like a pendulum,
behind him is an ice field>
<at the word 'to' cut scene: Umi Ryuuzaki looking out into
the distance where an island floats in midair. She is in an
elegant deep blue dress standing on a cliff, the sea below
her pounding against it, a fine spray in the air>
_It plays with no reason, it beats to no rhyme
<cut scene: A laughing Duo Maxwell in a plain looking
coarse, brown tunic and breeches is sitting at a table in
what seems to be a crowded tavern, playing poker with a
number of large men who are laughing uproariously>
<cut scene at the word 'it': Hikaru Shidou in a red robe,
smiling happily, standing in a forest clearing at mid-day
surrounded by animals and birds>
_In the depths of your soul, no solace to find
<cut scene: Wu Fei wearing a black silk Chinese shirt and
pants crouched atop a gargoyle on what appears to be a
cathedral. It is night and behind him the hints of
lightning flashes can be seen>
<cut scene at the word 'no': Asuka Soryu Langley in a gray
leather apron, a short sleeved tunic and leather breaches
wiping the sweat away from her brow as she stands inside a
darkened smithy, the only light provided by the flickering
red flames of the forge>
_Your heart longs to sing in chorus
<cut scene to a windswept canyon where a castle stands on
one cliff. Looking out of a balcony is a smiling Fuu
Hounjou in a beautiful green dress and holding a red rose
in her hand>
<cut scene at the word 'longs' to the foot of the tower is
Quatre Rebaba Winner in dark brown, looking elegant in his
noble finery. He is playing a guitar, obviously serenading
her and looking up at her in rapt fascination>
<cut scene at the word 'in' to a longer shot to show both
of them and the entire tower>
_Black skies, clouds heavy and gray
<cut scene: A vast darkened plain. There is a plateau some
distance away, low heavy clouds hang in the sky... every so
often there is a hint of a lightning flash seen barely
through the clouds>
_The shadows of war lie hidden away
<cut scene: On top of the plateau Hiro Yuy is in a tanktop
and jeans looking sternly down at the plain. There are
other figures with him, but they can barely be seen as
anything more than silhouettes>
_In the harsh glare of light, the flame blossoms forth
<Focus on Hiro's hand as he raises it where an embedded
circular crystal of pure white begins to glow.>
<cut scene at the second use of the word 'the' to a long
shot of the plain again as a tremendous wash of light from
Hiro's hand blasts away the shadows revealing a two
skirmish lines below him, obviously ready for battle>
_And the skies' rolling thunder echoes
<cut scene now to a slow pan as the pure white light from
Hiro reveals his companions. Standing next to him is an
expressionless Rei Ayanami in a simple green robe. Behind
and to his side are the other eight who were earlier shown.
_Closer together the silence is muted
<cut scene to an encampment on the plain, far from the
center of combat where the light from Hiro can still be
seen like a beacon. Standing there is Relena Darlien in a
magnificent gown fit for royalty. A circlet is on her brow
and a guarded expression on her face. There is another
person next to her, still half hidden by shadows>
<camera view shifts slightly as the person next to her
takes a step forward. It is revealed to be Shinji Ikari,
looking calm and dressed in regal battle armor, a huge
straight-edged sword in his hand>
_The song awaits to be shared
<Shinji takes Relena's hand and kisses it, a smile is
exchanged between the two before Shinji puts an open faced
helmet on and what can be seen of his face becomes a mask
of pure fury>
<the camera pans away from the two at the word 'shared' to
the shadowed tent behind them where a smiling Treize
Kushinada in an OZ general's dress uniform sits in an
elegant chair and sips something red from a wine glass>
_One voice to start with, another to follow
<cut scene to a close up of Hiro's face obviously shouting
something, the camera starts to pull back almost
immediately and suddenly a pair of pure white wings
seemingly made of light erupt from his back and he lifts
into the air.>
<As Hiro moves off camera, the view focuses on Rei as she
touches a brown crystal similarly embedded in her hand, a
wooden staff appears in her hand and she raises it as she
leaps off the edge of the plateau>
_Your voices are now raised as one
<cut scene: long shot as both sides surge forward, Shinji
at the forefront of one side fighting like a berserk, as
trees suddenly shoot out of the ground around him and his
troops>
<There is a quick series of cut scenes showing things
happen to the other eight on the plateau. Trowa glances at
the little watch he was holding earlier and smiles. Umi is
surrounded by a spiral of water. Asuka is orbited by razor
sharp metal shards. A ball of flames appears in Hikaru's
hands. Wu Fei steps into a pool of shadows and vanishes.
Sharp winds begin to whip around Fuu. Duo grins and simply
vanishes from view. Quatre raises a huge scimitar in his
hands and simply looks regretful.>
_Angels' voices rising in chorus
<cut scene: the battlefield erupts into chaos as normal
troops, monsters, and giant mecha are locked in battle, it
is almost impossible to know which side is which. None of
the mecha seem to be the same as those from the initial
portion of the intro. There is a pastiche of split-second
cut scenes showing portions of this battle>
_Songs of battle echo in the darkness
<cut scene: Zagato a tear falling form his eye as he stands
inside a dark cathedral, holding the still body of Princess
Emeraude in his arms. Standing off a short distance are
Kaji Ryouji, Rafaga, Alcyone, the adult Ascot and Caldina.>
<cut scene at the word 'in' to a darkened throne room where
Treize is seated on the throne, smiling, showing him
attended by Zechs, Noin, Lady Une and Misato Katsuragi>
_Burning passions, ignite the flames of frozen souls
<A quick series of cut scenes: Duo and Hikaru running down
a sunny beach chasing each other and laughing. Asuka and Wu
Fei standing at the table of a crowded tavern shouting at
each other, obviously arguing. A library where Umi is
caryring a tray of food to Trowa who is poring over
numerous books. Quatre and Fuu standing on the terrace of
the tower looking up at the night sky and holding hands.
Finally a naked Rei and Hiro floating in some sort of
glowing emptiness kissing each other.
_Hearts awaken and join the choir resounding
<Another quick series of cut scenes: A mecha, one of those
from the intro bursting out of a volcano. Another erupting
from the ground in an ice field. Another crashes out of the
walls of a windswept canyon. A fourth rising silently from
the streets of a dark city. The fifth flying out of the
cover of a huge verdant forest>
_Souls afire and none dare stand against it
<cut scene: the five mecha charging an unrecognizable sixth
one larger than the five, behind them the sky boils blood
red>
<cut scene again as the five begin to battle the one>
_One song rising, to claim the truth from heaven
<cut scene as there is tremendous spherical explosion where
the six mecha battle occurs which whites out the screen>
<At the word 'truth' the white begins to fade to show
Shinji Ikari's face smiling coldly. As the song fades out,
he begins to laugh silently as he his face too fades to
black.>
(Here's the song without the video)
Angels' voices rising in chorus
Songs of battle are whispered on the wind
Heartbeats, to measure the time
It plays with no reason, it beats to no rhyme
In the depths of your soul, no solace to find
Your heart longs to sing in chorus
Black skies, clouds heavy and gray
The shadows of war lie hidden away
In the harsh glare of light, the flame blossoms forth
And the skies rolling thunder echoes
Closer together the silence is muted
The song awaits to be shared
One voice to start with another to follow
Your voices are now raised as one
Angels' voices rising in chorus
Songs of battle echo in the darkness
Burning passions, ignite the flames of frozen souls
Hearts awaken and join the choir resounding
Souls afire and none dare stand against it
One song rising, to claim the truth from heaven