Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] (Ranma1/2) Another Sunrise
From: Allen Gainsford
Date: 12/2/1997, 11:49 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

At 20:18 1/12/97 -0800, you wrote:
	Akane almost jumped at Ranma's voice, but she soon settled down. Ranma
lied down beside her and said, "It's past midnight, whatcha doin here?"

This line doesn't really fit with the sun rising soon.

On the other hand, it's very Shakespearean...
(In "Hamlet", the prince meets his father's ghost at midnight, but a few
minutes later the cock is crowing...)

Allen


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