Subject: Re: [FFML] TRIO (chap 30)
From: Mark Doherty
Date: 11/30/1997, 4:58 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

At 10:25 PM 29/11/97 -0500, CHRISTIAN A ROGERS wrote:
				   TRIO:
				FIRST DATE:
		   THE BATTLE WITH JUGGERNAUT AND THE FLU!

	The leader smirked and for a second, due to a trick of the dance 
floors strobe lights, his eyes glowed green as he said, "Why you ask? 
I'm here to help.

?: I'll sue! I'll sue!

^_^

Why do I get the feeling that that little catchphrase is going to become a
callcry for any random paranoid/psycho/zealot character in SM fics? BTW,
that line doesn't really work by itself in your story. It might work better 
with something like "I'm here to help; help purify this hellpit in the flames 
of righteous justice.", or something like that.

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