At 10:25 PM 29/11/97 -0500, CHRISTIAN A ROGERS wrote:
TRIO:
FIRST DATE:
THE BATTLE WITH JUGGERNAUT AND THE FLU!
The leader smirked and for a second, due to a trick of the dance
floors strobe lights, his eyes glowed green as he said, "Why you ask?
I'm here to help.
?: I'll sue! I'll sue!
^_^
Why do I get the feeling that that little catchphrase is going to become a
callcry for any random paranoid/psycho/zealot character in SM fics? BTW,
that line doesn't really work by itself in your story. It might work better
with something like "I'm here to help; help purify this hellpit in the flames
of righteous justice.", or something like that.
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