Matthew Lewis, you bespoke:
At 11:33 PM 11/25/97 -0500, Andrew Huang wrote:
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Barney had risen.
El-Hazard would be plunged into a time of darkness like no other.
Evil. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeevil.
I think Andrew pretty much hit this one right on the nose.
This 'fic is EVIL.
yeah, i figured. i have this cold right now, and after screaming my head
off at the state b-ball championships (we won! yay!), i sound really evil
when i talk. i think it's warping my personality. ^_^
Also funny. I laughed my ass off (luckily, I managed to put it back
on).
whew! good for you! ^_-
(does that mean evil is good? and if so, does that mean that
by doing good deeds I'm sinning? or does this mean that maybe I
should get some more sleep?)
sleeplessness can be a god-send for desperate fanfic writers. that
story: case in point.
Continue it, if only to see B'Harne get trashed by the Eye of
God....
You know, I'm not so sure this would be such a good idea. Has to
do with my thoughts on how the Eye of God works (which has a basis in
the OAVs actually), and the original purpose of the Eye.
Not going to explain these thoughts here, because they're going to
be >explained in one of my fics, the third Disk (or Disc, if you
prefer), >which >takes a look at the history of the Eye of God.
oh? maybe i'll have to check out your 'fic before writing more. yes, i
plan on there being more. heh, heh. seriously, most of the people who
responded wanted more. sorry to those who implored me *not* to do another
chapter, but the masses have spoken.
I admit it. I admit it freely. I'm using this as shameless
self-promotion for >some of my stories. No questions about that. I know
it, you know it, we all >know it. I'm not going to deny that.
well, advertising is a business' lifeblood, and i don't see why fanfic
writing has to be different.
But I ask you, _is shameless self-promotion for fics really wrong?_
(stuff between _ _ would be in italics. There's a knack to it, but one
can >_actually talk in italics if one practices enough._ scary, isn't
it?)
deeply. i think this evil thing is getting to you, too.>
Anyway, I liked it, I really liked it.
Only problem: Harpo. Harpo was OOC. ^_-
Sorry, had to say that. Absolutely imperative to my well-being.
i figured *someone* had to be OOC. (and we can't have your well-being
damaged, now, can we?) sadly, i haven't watched the OAVs in a long while
(stupid comic book store sold 'em out from under me...), so my details may
be a little rusty. any help would be appreciated.
and i need a title. the one i gave it was just a last second addition for
the subject line and it really isn't official.
elsetime,
nem0
(who's suprised by all the responses to this... so that half-hour wasn't
wasted after all!)
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