other than spelling and grammer (Oh the horse is dead! I'll stop
beating it now! Heh) my only complaint is that I missed chapters 1&2.
If they aren't on a web page somewhere, could you mail them to me.
I can't comment Intelligently on the storyline if I don't know the
whole story so far.  This applies to all you other writers out there.
Please, tell us where we can find the earlier parts of your fics so
we know what the [Censored] we're commenting about.

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