OK! This chapter is *finally* more or less done. My pre-reader and I
are still looking at some changes, but I figured it was in good
enough condition to post now and revise later.
C&C is, as usual, requested. In particular, if you're a Washuu fan,
let me know what you think of this. Even though I'm using the Tenchi
TV continuity, I'm trying to restore to Washuu some of the complexity
she lost in the transition from the OAV. Let me know how successful
I've been at this.
And as I'm trying to work in some foreshadowing and red herrings
here, I'm interesting in hearing what you think is going to happen in
upcoming chapters, and why.
Hope you enjoy it. If you need the previous chapters, they're at:
http://ugrad-www.cs.colorado.edu/~andersor/fanfics/aikan/aikan.html
Hassheen!