At 11:01 AM 11/18/97 -0500, you wrote:

	Short? True, but think of it as a part 1 (also note that anything I
write tends to be short. I tend to skim over a lot of in between bits,

which 

can sometimes distract from the main storyline).
	I'm still not sure about his presentation to the princesses though 
(I could expand on that bit, such as his interaction with the guards before
he got to the audience hall, for instance). 

	You probably should. He did seem to gain entrance a bit easily, I
think. He also does seem to adjust rather easily to being in El Hazard,
too....

	I agree with this, I want to change it so that he doesn't at first
realise what's going on with his powers, and give him a different job at the
palace at first (as he doesn't tell/they don't believe his powers. A jester of
sorts, perhaps)

	Would he have visions of the Phantom Tribe, you think? Just a
general question....

	Actually, there is a part where I'm not sure if I want to use the
Phantom Tribe, or the Bugrom. It depends on who I see as more cruel/ruthless
I suppose. Right now, I'm leaning towards the Phantom Tribe, but that's
because
they have easier access to him (don't really want to spoil anything right
now).

	One question I'm thinking of is if I really want to include the 
Priestesses. I have a way that might not be too problematic (the Springs at
Arliman, and the annual journey to, for instance), but I am unsure if I want 
to have them (they would not be interacting with any of the Palace cast, from
the OAVs it looks doubtful they have seen each other in a long time, if at
all).


Working on a 'fic which relates the history of the Phantom Tribe, but have
no clue when it'll come out either (doubtful this year).

Matt "Shortfics are a way of life" Lewis