Cooooooooool.
	I can't say much more about it...it's sorta short; the prose is
decent, but not extraodinary. The idea, though, is just cooooooooool. ^_^
Are you going to continue with this one? I'd love to see more.

I have further ideas, bringing it to the end of the first set of OAVs
(after that, no clue). Most of the story would take place before the OAVs,
with perhaps a few incidents from the series thrown in (from a different
perspective). I don't want to alter the series really, just putting in a
hypothetical background (which seems to be what most of my ideas for
El Hazard fics are).

	That would probably be either the easiest way to write or the most
difficult way to write a fic.... You've already got a plot "pre-written",
but you do have to be able to stay within it. Interesting.

	Short? True, but think of it as a part 1 (also note that anything I
write tends to be short. I tend to skim over a lot of in between bits, which 
can sometimes distract from the main storyline).
	I'm still not sure about his presentation to the princesses though 
(I could expand on that bit, such as his interaction with the guards before
he got to the audience hall, for instance). 

	You probably should. He did seem to gain entrance a bit easily, I
think. He also does seem to adjust rather easily to being in El Hazard,
too....

	There are only a few things I have yet decided on for upcoming parts,
most things are still up in the air (such as how he interacts with most of
the people, except for the princesses), the coming of Gallus, and I still need
some more scenes/ideas to flesh the whole thing out.

	Would he have visions of the Phantom Tribe, you think? Just a
general question....

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