Hi again! ^_^
First of all, I'd like to say *Thank You* to everyone who sent me C&C!
It was insightful, and extremely helpful. I wish I had the time to respond
to each of you who wrote, but unfortunately, I am bound by some
severe time restraints at the moment. I didn't even have time to
check my email until *after* Tybalt had already banned the HoI firearms
debate. ^_^;
Anyway, I have since done a bit of revision to the last scene based
on the comments I received, and have posted it to my Hearts of Ice
web page, which can be found at:
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Ginza/1519
Also, when I posted Part 18, I was in such a hurry that I neglected
to thank my pre-readers. Ryan Chang, Mike Loader, Mark McKinnon,
Gary Kleppe -- you guys are *awesome!*
Also, for anyone who's interested, I've already started on Part 19.
Hopefully I'll finish it in less than four months. ^_^
Ja matta,
Krista