At 07:36 PM 11/11/97 -0000, Sean Gaffney wrote as Hotaru dictated:
Hotaru: At some point, a character says, "Oh, dung." I think
that should be changed, as it took me *right* out of
the fic. Dang, perhaps.
Sean: Agreed, though it could be a spellcheck typo. I also
remember at one point the stage directions talking about
the author. There is a time and a place for author
insertion, as I told Andrew, and this seemed wrong.
It could also be just the way this particular character expresses
displeasure, and therefore totally in-character and not a typo at all
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