Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C/MST-ish] Together Again: 1996 Act II
From: Jeanne Hedge
Date: 11/11/1997, 11:03 PM
To: "FFML" <fanfic@fanfic.com>

At 07:36 PM 11/11/97 -0000, Sean Gaffney wrote as Hotaru dictated:

Hotaru:  At some point, a character says, "Oh, dung."  I think
        that should be changed, as it took me *right* out of
        the fic.  Dang, perhaps.
Sean:  Agreed, though it could be a spellcheck typo.  I also
      remember at one point the stage directions talking about
      the author.  There is a time and a place for author
      insertion, as I told Andrew, and this seemed wrong.

It could also be just the way this particular character expresses
displeasure, and therefore totally in-character and not a typo at all




Jeanne Hedge


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