At 9:01 PM -0400 11/8/97, Nobody wrote:

Ugh, I think I'm going to be sick. ^_^ I like it! :) All the dark and
twisted things they can never do, they are doing. But poor kawaii Ucchan
trapped with Tsubasa (which doesn't look to be good for Ukyou,
considering how he has been treating her the past few days). At least
Shampoo is with Ranma.

I hope you decide to add some explicit lemon content to this. :)
Particular Ranma (or even better, Ranma-chan) with Shampoo/Ukyou, and
Akane with Ryouga (or maybe P-chan ^_^), or even Shampoo with Ukyou.
ESPECIALLY Ranma(-chan) with Shampoo. :)

Why are you splitting up the fic into 10k parts, instead of lumping it
into larger parts? Its kind of distracting to have to go to the next
message every 10k.

Lemon?? I dunno...might ruin the flow...I'll see what happens. Sorry about
the chapter lengths, I'll try to make the chapters a bit longer. Thanks for
the input.
			-neB