I've notice something rather,.... interesting, since I started
writing my own stories. It's almost imposible to completely shut up the
editor in me. I'll be reading something and I'll thing, "that isn't
worded right," or "he used the same phrase in the same paragraph, how
about changing it to this," and so on.

   No matter what I do I can't shut it up. How many other writers out
there suffer from the same malady?

Bree Duffy
Druid
druid@bbs.chemek.cc.or.us