Andrew Huang wrote:

  "Hey! What are you mmmpphhh!" she said as I kissed her on the
mouth.

sounds like a scene earlier in my fic....

  I stepped back, looking at her face, illuminated by the moonlight.
On
her pretty features, shadowed just a bit by her long hair, I saw the

tail end of her shock and surprise, saw it change to a bit of
reddish
embarassment, and then suddenly to anger.  But there had--

  *slap*

went about the same way for Shinji too :P

  I was going to be an absolute basketcase in the morning. I hate
not
being able to sleep. It certainly wasn't coming now, either.
Finally, I
decided to get this over with, and go to talk with Asuka. I figured
that
she had to be as bothered by this as I was. I was hoping she was, at

least.

Shinji?? go and confront a problem?????  hehe...

  The mass of cloth and hair pushed itself apart to reveal a still
sleepy Asuka, who turned too look at me. She blinked. And she
blinked
again.

  I imagine that my face was locked into a rictus of horrified
panic.

hehe...I can see that vividly :P

Overall Impression:  I liked this story.  I haven't seen too many Eva
fics that have dealt primarily with Asuka.  Sure it was in Shinji's
point of view and dealt with how he felt, but Asuka was the one I
thought was more important in the story.  Well anyways, I liked it, I
just do.

Captain Jack