Raymond Haney wrote:
he would call his closest friends and enemies. Beside him stood Ryoga
Hibiki. Ranma had managed to corner P-Chan in the Tendo dojo and get some
hot water on him and had told him the situation. Akane, who was standing to
I can't see Ranma voluntarily bringing Akane into a dangerous situation.
Maybe you should add something about her refusing to stay behind.
The five had arrived only a few minutes earlier and had been quite taken
aback by the appearance of Colognes guests. Dr. Tofu had immediately gone
Perhaps you should say what was so shocking. I know the Beast has blue
fur, but I don't really read X-Men. Just how silly-looking are their
current costumes?
that Akane's English is the best among the youths so she can help here."
When it looked as if Akane would protest Cologne continued, placatingly,
"Need I remind you that there are injured people here and there is no
guarantee that their enemies might find them. They'll need some defense."
Besides, neither Ranma nor Ryouga would allow her to come along into
this kind of situation.
Akane nodded reluctantly. "Hai," she paused as a thought came to her,
"Maybe we could also call Ukyou. Her English is pretty good and she could
help out also."
They should have called her in the first place. It's kind of annoying
that all the Ranma girls are neatly kept out of the action. Shampoo is
missing, while Akane and Ukyou get told to stay behind.
Cologne nodded and Akane slipped into the back to find a phone after
giving Ranma a hard look.
Why Ranma? He didn't suggest Ukyou, and Cologne was the one who asked
Akane to stay there.
pretty good. As a matter of fact, on that one, I might ask you that
question, Logan-san."
* snikt *
Three gleaming metal blades popped out of each of Wolverine's hands as a
feral grin flashed across his face. "Yeah kid, I think I'm pretty good
myself."
Cologne grinned as the Ranma crew stared in awe. Wolverine started for the
Still, the claws alone won't impress them for long. Once Mousse starts
pulling the training potties out of thin air, Ryouga breaks through some
walls with a touch, and Ranma fires some chi blasts, Wolverine may be
the one impressed. I'll be interested to see how you compare their
respective abilities.
This seems like an interesting story and I hope you continue it. The
important thing is to show respect for both sets of characters. Don't
allow the X-Men to dominate the Ranma cast, or vice-versa.