Cor.
	's good.

Thanks.  :)

	<nodnod>

You think you failed? I'd love to see when you think you've
succeeded.

:)  I was only wondering it the present tense stream-of-consciousness 
format had been done okay.  I think it started well then kind of faded. 
 I'm going to give it another look later.

	Ah, I see what you mean. Either way, though, I think you've
captured the feeling enough to make it work wonderfully, so you're
covered. Remember my little essay on successful writing types? You got the
mood shaping down perfect.

Anyway, thanks for the comments.  :)

	Hey, no prob. You know, not to sound peevish, but I think this is
the first time that you've responded to me on something other than a
direct inquiry. ^_^

>From Andrew Huang, brought to you by his computer, Oddzilla

Thank Oddzilla, too.  :)

	Good boy. Have a RISC chip. <crunch> :)

>From Andrew Huang, brought to you by his computer, Oddzilla
Oddzilla says, "Mmmmm...Evanjellydonut...."
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