Subject: Re: [FFML][OMG][The Heart Of One Man]
From: David Lerman
Date: 10/26/1997, 9:20 PM
To: Anand Rao , fanfic@fanfic.com

A very nice bittersweet story.  However, I do have some reservations about
Keiichi as depicted in the story.  Keiichi doesn't seem to mind that his
reputation as the greatest inventor since Thomas Edison springs from
Skuld's designs.  I realize that his reputation is of little consequence to
him, but he doesn't seem to have any qualms at all.

I'm also a little puzzled that Kami-sama doesn't mind that Skuld is so
radically changing the world.  


                                                                          dml
                                                                     (who
always keeps ice cream in
                                                                      his
freezer, just in case)