After carefully re-reading the first revenge-fic, I realized something.
It sucked eggs. So, I am re-doing it in typical revengefic fasion.
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A chill went down my spine.
The cold days were coming sooner that I expected as I hopped out of my
car. I just just gotten back from delivering a letter to the post office
that would go to Onee-sama. I missed her alot.
Just when was about to step onto the property of my home, a hand touched
my shoulder. I turned to see a rather unusual sight for somthing about
this year.
There, wearing a sailor fuku, was a girl that resembled Sakura from
Street Fighter Alpha 2. Only, there was somethings that were definately
wrong. One, her skin was a few shades darker. Two, her usual blue skirt
was a dark grey. Three, she had a very chilling look that did not have
the same zest for life that I knew Sakura-chan did.
"Who... who are you?" I asked, starting to back up. If this person was
who I thought it was, I was in DEEP cow cookies.
"I will answer that, only if you tell me if you are Christian Clark."
I nodded nervously, knowing that either way, I was dead. If I did lie,
then she probably figure it out anyway.
"I am Shin Sakura. I took it upon myself to take revenge for the Ranma
Team for what you did to them in "Hammer�s Wrath."
"What do you mean, �you took it upon yourself�?"
She smiled a bit evily and said, "Originally, they hired Akuma,
Cyber-Akuma, and Shin Ryu to take you out. I got to them first."
"And? What happened to them?"
Her evil grin got only bigger as she proudly announced. "I killed them
all!"
Turning, I tried to run away, but found the collar of my shirt grabbed.
She was holding onto my shirt and casually listed the things that the
Ranma team was getting revenge for.
"Let�s see. From Hammer�s Wrath, you slashed Ukyou�s eye, almost killed
Konastu, charred both Shampoo and Mouse into a near crisps, burnt
Colonge into nothing, nearly suffocated both Kunos and their servant,
tossed Ranma around like a rag doll, turned Akane into a bad guy, beat
Ryoga within an inch of his life, and killed off Happosai."
At that time I was wishing she�d just get it over with. But then she
continued.
"In "A Time for Tendou", you beat Ranma into a pulp again, made him lose
twice if I may add, drained Shampoo, Ukyou, and Kodachi in the same
attack. Then, in "A Disease called Life" you beat Ranma, Ukyou, Shampoo
and Ryoga severely, had that new character repeatedly beat Ranma, had
Nabiki beaten, and almost killed both Akane and Nabiki."
I was shocked, I wasn�t even done with those yet and already they knew.
But how? That didn�t matter now. I was a dead man.
All of a sudden, I felt the sensation of being teleported to somewhere.
And realized that this was somewhere where no one would be able to find
me. We were in central Utah, were plains and trees reigned supreme. And
where no one was there to witness my inevitable execution.
For the next half an hour, I now felt the sensations of what a punching
bag felt like. After another 6 hitter, I struggled to get up so I could
at least attempt to escape. No hope there. Several super combos and
level 3 specials later, I was a battered and beaten man. Since I
couldn�t even get up again, I tried to crawl away. But once more, I was
hoisted above my feet by the inhumanly strong Evil Sakura. She spoke to
me with a grin that I had come to despise.
"So Chris. You sorry now?"
Silence was my only answer. I still didn�t feel ashamed for thrusting a
little humility into Ranma, and putting the spatula girl, Mr. Piggy, and
the bimbo in their places.
She only smiled and continued. "I was hoping you�d do that. Are you
familiar with the Raging Demon Assault?" My only working eye widened.
That was the same move Akuma used, that no one EVER got up from. "Good,
�cause I invited a few others too. HEY LILLITH! MORRIGAN! YOU CAN COME
OUT NOW!"
My blood turned cold. I knew who those two were. The succubi sisters
materialized behind me and then the massacre began. I learned that since
basically Evil Sakura was friends with both sisters, she picked up on
how to make her own double while doing her killer demon move. While as
the other two also had their own double to execute on me.
Three, no make that six, demons of vengeance punched, kicked, and
blasted my body to near oblivion. After about... oh say, the twelfth
hit, which was about the second to the originals, everything turned
bright and I lost consciousness.
I awoke to see an unfamiliar ceiling. I could only see out of my lazy
left eye. Everything appeared to be a white color. Even the blue
ceiling. I looked to the left to see only the light from outside. While
I looked to the left to see a few others in hospital beds. I was able to
get a glimpse at where I was.
Apparently the Fanfic Author�s Ward at the hospital. At that time I
noticed the respirator on my face. Also, both my arms were in casts. It
hurt to breathe. Slowly, I returned to the limbo from where I came from.
When next I awoke, I overheard someone talking to another. I also
noticed my respirator was gone and the cast on my right arm was gone.
"Remember, you can only stay for a few minutes."
"Thank you."
With hardly any strength left in my body, I turned to see someone I had
not seen for years. There, in casual wear, was Iczer 1. The first anime
woman I ever truly loved. The oversized shirt and pants she wore was
still a painful bleached version of their original colors.
I couldn�t believe it. After all this time, she came to see me. Of all
people.
"You all right?" She smiled and reached for my hand. Her touch was
gentle, as always. That was why I loved her so much.
I nodded weakly. Then, I looked up to her and asked. "Why? After..."
She interrupted me gently. "Don�t worry about it. We�re still friends
right? Because of that, I rescued you after I found you almost dead. You
called for help, and I heard it. You�ve been in a coma for the past
week."
I thanked her to the best of my ability. Coughing came hard and quickly
and vanished with no trace. We engaged in small talk for a few more
minutes before the nurse that looked a lot like Amelia Seyruun from
Slayers told her to leave.
Before she walked out, I spoke, "Hey." She turned back to me as I
continued, "Take care of yourself." She smiled back and walked out.
Looking back up to the ceiling, I then finally let go.
I was hurting, and when ever I got into a fight with some of the other
boys at school, I would always cry after I got home.
Now, I was crying again. Because I am hurt and was hurt for what I did
and believed. But because I was alive, I thanked The Heavenly Father,
the Savior, and the Holy Ghost for sparing my measly little life. If
this was to be a test of my faith in Him, I must have just overcome the
largest and hardest hurdle. Or maybe, this was just the lowest, ready to
get worse.
The end.
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I think.
Also, there IS actually an Evil Sakura out there in the video game SF
vs. Marvel Super Heroes. Just check the newest Gamepro for the tip on
how to get her and all the other hidden characters.
The reason for this, is that I wanted something better after I wrote
that stinky first revengefic. I personally think this one is better. If
you like it or not, it�s your decision.
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