Sarah: heellllooooo
Eric: would that be your bellybutton speaking again?

Sarah: well we decided that the old way of doing fanfic reviews was
getting a bit tedious.

Eric: sooo we decided to just do a general review of a few and see how
it goes.

Sarah: okay well now on to the story.  What Dreams May Come

Eric: this was a great story.  Though i did totally lose myself in that
psychologist thing, which i assume was the self indulgence?

Sarah: you dweeb, you never paid attention in class did you?

Eric: ...

Sarah: but i concur with my not so illustrious colleague this was a
great little story.  Personally i enjoyed the exploration of why Ranma
want to create a fantasy world...

Eric: and the discussion of why Akane is an ideal mate for him.

Sarah: oh tres touching *sniff*

Eric: on the other hand... YOU NAILED UKYOU WITH A TABLE!?!?!!!!!!!!

Sarah: get over it.

Eric: A TABLE!!!!

Sarah: you'll live.

Eric: i was stunned.

Sarah: a couple morethings, as i approached the end of the story i sort
of hoped for two things to happen.  It could've been incredibly tragic
in a couple of senses.  Maybe its the pessimist in me or whatever.
However it might've been real interesting if Ranma a> found an Akane in
the world he had woken up in and run off with her or something or
b>found an Akane in this world only to have his memories erased by the
shampoo.

Eric: coincidentally xiar min?  Charmin?  cool...  I do agree with the
delicate flower, miss leahy here.

Sarah: *snorts*

Eric: I've always enjoyed certain endings to the story and yours had
great potential and i must admit a certain sense of disappointment to
you returning to the status quo.

Sarah: though the ending was slightly scary, your epilogue?  Yeesh, that
was kinda eerie in a way.  Maybe it comes from being a fictional
creation myself but i dont think that would be anyway i would like to
end up.

Eric: you're alternative fiancee's were... interesting.

Sarah: thought it would've been really interesting to see the otherworld
Ranma in the Akane World meeting up with shy and timid Akari and see
what he had to say about that.

Eric: anyways great story!

Sarah: laters!

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