That was great! :) Are you planning on writing more? It would be fun to
see how the main character deals with Ranma's problems. How will he react
to Akane's violent malleting, Kodachi's insane laughter and chasing after
him, Shampoo's open affection, and Ukyou's excellent cooking? (You can
tell which two of Ranma's fiancees I think are best for him right here:)
Another interesting point is whether or not Ranma will still be able to
fight well. My opinion is that fighting ability is both mental and
physical- mental is knowing how and when to use what moves, and physical
is being able to do them. I think this Ranma would be able to hold his
own in combat against lesser opponents by using sheer strength and
agility, but would have problems against more skilled fighters such as
Ryouga.
Will the author try to resolve Ranma's problems? Perhaps he can convince
Ryouga to end their feud...maybe fix Ryouga up with Akane?
Will he give in to Shampoo's advances and go all the way with her in a
spectacular lemon scene?
I really hope you decide to write more. :)