Subject: (c&c) Ranma's Curse
From: Scott Jamison
Date: 10/23/1997, 7:40 PM
To: Fanfic ML


	Interesting so far...
	I think perhaps the next chapter should have Ranma and the girls 
rethinking their priorities a little as they learn about the manliness 
pledge and hopefully realize that Genma had a better reason to be upset 
at any compromise of Ranma's masculine image than he let on.
	I'd especially like it if Kasumi concedes that perhaps she went a 
little too fast and furious in separating Ranma from Genma and switching 
Ranma to the especially feminine look at the beginning of the story.
	The goals at the beginning were to get Ranma used to being in 
female form for the long run, and to get his schoolmates to accept "her" 
new identity.  This has pretty much been accomplished, so I'd say the 
next step is to heal the family, and that means reassuring the parents 
that Ranma is *not* abandoning his masculinity or surrendering to the 
curse.  At this point, I'd think Ranma could swing back to a more 
androgynous look (ala Haruka) without the daycare kids getting too 
confused...

SKJAM!