On Wed, 22 Oct 1997, Ranma Al'Thor wrote:

What is Beach house?  I guess I missed those episodes.
Characterization looks good, seems like an okay opening.

Beach house is the name given to the House of Sea (or it's equivalent) by
US Manga corps in the Original OAV series (The one before the TV series
and Movie 1.). Beach house doesn't play that big of a role so it is kinda
of easy to miss in this series (whereas House of Sea is big in the TV
series...).

As for the fic itself, good start and I can't wait to see it go further.
One small point is the fact that Ohta is misspelled through the fic. It
should be Ohta not Otah...

The only other comment is one I have for US Manga corps, and my downright
dislike for there romanization of Goto's name to Gotoh..(have no idea
where that came from...)

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Matsunaga Mikage "Chemistry Forever!!!"

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