I have to say, I love this fic! ^_^ Everything works out, without any of
the angst that we're used to. :) This -might- be construed as a problem...
but I like it, in this case. It's a short, happy, yet still surprisingly
odd fic. :)
A few points: I kept expecting Ranma, Ukyou, and Kasumi to not fall in
love, but just 'understand' each other well... as you said that those are
the results 50% of the time. Unfortunately, you don't use this... but I
like it better this way. :) I like the idea of the potion itself, too...
very nifty! :)
Also... about spelling... I know that you're going to get ribbed about
this a lot, but still... "Shanpoo?" "Utchan"? Shanpoo I could see... but
Utchan just doesn't make sense to me. Of course, I haven't seen any of the
anime in which these names are actually -spoken-, soo... >;)
I would have done a blow-by-blow C&C... but unforunately, I don't have
time. Gomen. ^_^
Other than that... great! Keep it up!
"Common Sense is what tells you the Earth is flat."
Adam Conover
dconover@garnet.acns.fsu.edu
http://garnet.acns.fsu.edu/~dconover/main.html
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