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"The teacher's working conditions are the student's learning conditions"
- Anonymous
“EQUAL”
>From the Desk of Megane 6.7
<snip>
TO BE CONTINUED....
Thus ends the first chapter in a story I’ve been meaning to write for
some time. I originally got this idea from reading “The Least One Can
Do” by Jeffrey “Oneshot” Wong (If you get the chance, check it out, if
you haven’t already) but I had left it on the backburner until now.
It's still a little rough at the moment but I wanted to get some
feedback and suggestions on it. I hope you liked the first chapter and
C&C is very welcome. :)
I think you left this one on the backburner far too long. Ranma's life being
in a rut might be one of the biggest understatements of the year (sort of
like a lot of the he Ranma 1/2 stories of late... but I'll get flamed for
that one later ^_^).
I really like the premise as it gives Ranma the chance at a bit of
normality. Although I expect complications to arise, I can see Ranma
defending himself against the rut with ferocity.
You've lit the torch, I want to see you run with it now. ^_~
See ya
___________
/ Here lies:\
| Andrew | "Have you compiled a Linux kernel lately?"
| |
| I think | Andrew Petalik {ICQ ID: 160869}
| he's hungry | "I am the Great Cornholio! I need TP for my bunghole.
| | You can not run away from your own bunghole."