John W. Conner wrote:

An interesting story.  I look forward to seeing the next portion of this to
see how you intend to carry the story forward.

I already have a lot of the second story written, I think I might finish it
tonight, but I'll need to go over it for errors first. I'll post it as soon as I
feel happy enough with it, might be a week.

Tell me will more of Druid's
past be revealed in this fic, or do you intend to leave that for a latter
story?

   There will be hints of it here and there, but the full story of his past
won't be out for a while as I'm not sure what to do with it. I've actually
written a fair amout about it, but it's not ready and may not be for some time.

About the only problems that I saw with this story where a few
spelling errors and some of the gramar structure could you a little bit of
work.  Other than those two things a very good first effort.  Keep up the
good work.

   I'm quite willing to hear about spelling and gramatical errors, unlike some
others. I do run a spell checker periodically, but I forgot to run one when I
before I posted it. Besides there are always the errors that are real words,
just the wrong spelling.

Thanks for writing me, I'm glad to hear from you.

Bree

Druid
druid@bbs.chemek.cc.or.us