I saw a few minor misspellings and gramatical mistakes but after the
fuss raised recently , I shan't go into details .  I did note one thing
in one scene you refer to Andrew. and not ever again.

I liked the story and recommend it to anyone who enjoys authorfics. It
was fairly well written although no origin for the main character is
given. It seems fairly certain he is an otaku or at least a fan of Ranma
1/2. I liked the way the weakness of his enhanced healing was shown and
would like to see more of his strnghths and weaknesses. Druid seems to
be in his second or third adventure although few details are given for
his past.
Still it was a fun read not great but enjoyable.

Rick Robinson

rik@cfanet.com