At 01:34 PM 16/10/97 -0400, HHDeNi@aol.com wrote:
Well there is that. What did you think? Sorry it's taken
me a while to get this out I simply haven't really gotten
on the net for about two weeks, during one of which I had
the flu. Anyway please send any comments you might wish
I will listen to them. Hopefully I won't take so long for
the next chapter, and I'm going to try to mildly rewrite
the previous chapters so send whatever you think might
help on them in as well. I'm already in the process of
revising this one, I just thought I'd try and get some more
input. See ya.
Ah, so it's UKYOU who's the Garion template for this story. Does
this mean she gets to marry the Ce'Nedra template(who would HAVE
to be Akane, if it's anyone from Ranma1/2. Kodachi at a stretch.) ^_^
You have to be careful with the amount of time taken to write these
versus their length. It seems like it's taking forever to go nowhere,
the Ranma-Nabiki-Barak scene (from the last chapter?) has been the
most interesting so far, because it has no basis in the Belgariad books.
This also had some differences, but the sooner you diverge more, the better.
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