UkyouKwnji@aol.com wrote:

***** Now here’s where I start to run into trouble.  For the moment,
I decided to allow Kodachi some brief soul-searching, at which point
she decides to offer her body instead, and rips her leotard off to
show herself to him.

Why?  What does she hope to gain?
 

  The devil’s eyes popped.  This was an offer he didn’t get every
day.  Sure, sex was always his for the taking -- after all, the
Father of Lust must indulge in it as often as he can -- but succubi
were so invariably perfect in form and ability that it got boring
after awhile, whereas mortals, well... that was usually meant as a
punishment for them.

Satan would be more likely to use lust as a lure and trap than to indulge in
it himself.  The whole point of incubi and succubi is that they ruin and
ensnare humans.  I can't see any reason that a fallen angel would care about
sex for its own sake.  

  At the same time, she was proud of herself.  To think that this
body could tempt the devil himself!

***** The devil decides to take her up on it: “Tomorrow night.
Midnight.  Right here.”  And here’s where I’m wondering where to go.

This story has obvious lemon potential in at least two different
directions:

1.)  Kodachi and the devil himself.  Need I say more?  The details,
however, pose a bit of a problem.  Appropriately, they would be
sicker and more violent than La Blue Girl or some others of that
ilk.  I don’t like the idea, even for Kodachi: I can’t see *anyone*
surviving an encounter like this.  And think about it -- surely
even Kodachi deserves better.  Besides, I doubt I could write a
sufficiently sick & violent lemon scene for this.  Alternatively...

The Devil is interested in souls, not bodies.  He might degrade her, but only
as a means of breaking her spirit, so to speak.  

1.)  Gosunkugi and Kodachi ‘do it’ first -- so that when the devil
arrives, he realizes he’s not dealing with a virgin anymore and
stalks off in disgust.  I can see part of this – particularly an
ending where, once the devil leaves the scene, Kodachi straddles
Gosunkugi’s face and demands that he tell NO ONE about this or
she’ll suffocate him right there and then.

Satan would probably regard that as a great victory.  Kodachi degrades herself
by having sex with someone she loathes, and she does it of her own free will.

-- David.