Sorry about the lateness of this C&C, but I was swamped with a large 
backlog of messages in my mailbox.

I'm going to miss the Tribe of One, especially Play :P...she could have 
made for some nice lemon side stories, e.g. Ranma/Shampoo. Play is my 
favourite aspect of Ranma's personality, due to her ..."playfulness".

I find it a bit odd that the whole tribe is falling apart, just because 
Guardian is gone. They have been living with each other for the better 
part of ten years...so that they should have been able to adapt easier. 
It shouldn't have gotten to the point it did...

Now that the tribe is gone, there might be a problem with this fic 
starting to be more and more like a plain elseworlds type fic. The stuff 
with the tribe was what got me interested in reading this story in the 
first place (I don't have time to read ALL the fics that come through 
this mailing list, so I just read the ones that seem more interesting). 

You've gone to all this trouble to create this tribe...and now you merge 
them into one personality which is somewhat exactly the same as Ranma in 
the anime series. Kinda detracts from the uniqueness of this story.

I find myself wishing Ranma had beat Cologne until she was nothing more 
than a bloody pulp, for what she did to the tribe, especially Play...